After getting Chapter 12 up, I ended up getting a review on another site questioning a line in Chapter 9 between Pinkie Pie and Eddy. I made an appropriate adjustment to fit the dialogue between them.

On a rainy night when the world has turned into black and white, a card game was going on a particular street in Ponyville. Inside a cafe where all the lights except for one that shines down on a table. Discord looked up from his hand at the stallion across from him. This said stallion held up his cards like a shield, scanning through his glasses.

"So I've heard your latest little dare turned out well."

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